First of all congratz on your 1st map! Really nice looking map. 
Now for some critics. 
I agree with Wingzor regarding the scripts.
I'm used to decompile every new map and check scripts for any harmful codes. When I saw scripts written in promod-like style they've really raised my attention, like there's something harmful in there for real. So I've spend fairly long time reformatting the scripts noticing there's no harmful code inside.
What I'm trying to say is putting scripts in this style is a really dick move(not to mention all the thread and variable names). I mean what were you trying to hide in there? Scared that someone will stole your copy-paste scripts? I understand promod is written in that style to prevent people stealing the code but that's a mod code. If you'd want no one to see the script you might aswell not compile them with map and have them side map and run it on your servers only.
I hope you understand how this feels. 
Best regards,
Tommy
